I love the world building and the characters and the magic. But damn, Ryan! Let the characters be wrong or stew a bit! Anytime they do something or feel bad, within a page an older or wiser character comes to tell them they’re exactly right and it’s all okay. Just wipes any conflict off the board constantly. I don’t want to be spoon fed how to feel about characters and their choices.
— Nov 02, 2025 06:45PM
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