The writing feels so flat. The dialogue feels fake. The emotional beats feel pre-labeled.
Its annoying and predictable and... safe, I guess?
The fall vibes are extremely heavy-handed. I swear there's a mention of pumpkins at least once in every page. The name of the MC is AUTUMN for fucks sake. Its soooooo on the nose
It feels like a pumpkin spice hostage situation. Or being fed baby food with glitter. Sweet mush
— Jun 12, 2026 07:32PM
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