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god this book can’t end soon enough

the formatting of this book is gonna be the death of me. it’s so wonky in some chapters and feels like a rough draft lowkey. however, the story itself is getting a little better, so that’s a win. i feel like this book has so much potential, if only it had been properly edited

THINGS ARE NOT PROPERLY EXPLAINED!! how do these people know everything?? why are the siblings not freaked tf out to find they come from magic?? this is pissing me off

the way this is written feels like we’re kinda jumping all over the place

i forgot how insufferable some of frieda’s characters can be

i enjoy how short the chapters are

the concept for this book is good, but the way it’s being executed is not. it’s so painfully aware that it’s been self-published and edited. there are so many mistakes and it’s making it difficult to fully immerse myself in the story. lord only knows how long it will take me to complete this book