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this feels like a "tell rather than show". dont describe people's character, show it through their dialogue, their manners. dick(head)ens is lacking there

reading only because my undecisive ass decided to ask the random wheel what i should read next.

note to self:
"On the other hand, Oscar Wilde, Henry James, and Virginia Woolf complained of a lack of psychological depth, loose writing, and a vein of saccharine sentimentalism."

its so bad, the past and present versions dont connect, the characters are a mess