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2.5 stars. -1 for horrible editing and can’t even get the model of car straight. -1 for average story. -.5 for weird ending.

I got curious and end up skimming part of this book... know the major plot lines that's going to happen and continue from where I left off... is it normal to want to just skip to the part where the guy dies, so I don't have to read his selfish comments like "if we're lucky the stress will cause a miscarriage." Heidi girl why.

One second they're having sex on the granite countertop, next second the fmc's head is tossing on the pillow... like wtf.

Slightly peeved by the disjointed scenes of this series. Example, there's a scene where FMC is hurt and went to her friend house. She went directly to work, after work in an alternative timeline she went to a store to buy a something then went home, in mmc eyes, he saw her the day before at the friends but only the back, so didn't realize she's hurt, the next day when he stalked her at school he took her.

The amount of time music is reference in this book almost shows me the author is trying to increase word count for no freakin reason.