God this premise has so much potential but the execution so far is falling short. There's elements of repetition that are just so unnecessary and make it seem 'clunky' to read. The FMC has referenced Scarlet Letter and Handmaid's Tale so many times I've lost count. And some of the dialogue feels like it's a pushed agenda of the correct way to speak to someone, it makes the characters seem one dimensional and bland.
— Oct 09, 2024 03:14PM
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