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**** you Rina Kent you are quite literally the worst author in the UNIVERSE !!!!!!! I honestly want to beat your ***. Yes I’m dramatic but damn you’re a horrible writer

RINAAAAAA first of all why are we getting a Levi centered chapter and you’re telling me Brandon’s dad who I’m assuming is in his 50s and is British essentially royalty would say “Even with his hair tied back, he still gives a major creeper vibe” right…. Right…..

“Just knots that I’ll slayer anyone you lay near you and fuck you’re in their blood” Rina PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD TAKE A WRITING CLASS

Okay the sex scenes are good but Rina I beg never write a book again because you’re the worst author on earth

Okay Rina, I love Nikolai and this 🌶️ scene that just happened I loved. Maybe I don’t hate this book after all

Okay okay okay, I might’ve enjoyed the alley scene

So a full on taking advantage of a drunk person rape scene and says “tonight I’m taking one I should’ve stolen that night. I met him at the initiation. Whether his delusional brain is willing to admit, he wants me or not”

IM SO FUCKING OVER THIS CRY BABY BITCH BRANDON. Honestly why am I even reading this book at this point I hate it and I fucking hate Rina, girl watch the hell out !!!! Your writing is ass

the DIALOGUE IS SO BAD. Rina Kent if you’re reading this I hope you take a fucking writing class because what the hell is this girl.

I’m so over the word “heathens” it’s cringe to the max and I don’t need it every 5 sentences.

Okay I’m kinda feeling it but also a borderline rape scene just happened

I can’t stop laughing at how cringe this book is

I’m so sorry but the whole intro to chapter 3… what the absolute fuck is going on. “KOLYA JR. HAS BEEN ADVENTUROUS SINCE HE got his first boner at the fresh age of five.
It was such a marvelous discovery when I found my Wiener hard that I giggled with glee. Then I proceeded to run all over our house, dangling, pointing, and showing it off to anyone who crossed my path while shouting, "Look!
I have a gun!"

I’m so sorry to Rina Kent, but this writing is absolutely horrible, I don’t need a metaphor or reinterpretation of something every three sentences. “My words come in mumbled, haunted sounds, like in those creepy horror, movies where the nerd dies first.” BE SO FOR REAL Rina, this is so stupid and it’s like this every 2 wordsZ

The writing in this book is honestly horrible, I’m cringing but the book was a gift by my BF so I’m going to power through. I feel like I’m reading something an emo 14 yr old wrote and really thought they were writing something so incredible and amazing… let’s see how this goes.

“It arrives. The brightness between us.” LITERAL FULL BODY CHILLS WHEN I READ THAT.