I mean the short chapter pacings are good for the shorts generation, but imo the timeline and the povs change a little too much, not saying that it’s confusing, but it might cause readers to forget some clues, which could’ve been intentional. I love how the book worked on the arcs even being a mystery but there were too many characters like some needed better arcs&explanation. Could’ve dug deeper history wise
— Jul 18, 2026 05:14AM
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