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Ardalan is on page 250 of 319 of Yellowface
The book feels unnecessarily long and lacks a strong hook. It focuses too heavily on Athena’s ghost and online bullying, as if the author had little else to explore. The plot is often predictable and occasionally illogical, especially when June fails to consider being recorded and exposed at the end. The conclusion also feels rushed, as though the author was eager to finish the story.
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Ardalan is on page 250 of 319 of Yellowface
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Ardalan is on page 30 of 328 of 1984
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Ardalan is on page 160 of 285 of The Humans
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Ardalan is on page 120 of 285 of The Humans
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Ardalan is on page 86 of 144 of Ties
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