E.L. Montague > Recent Status Updates

Both part 1 and 2 hooked me in, but I don't yet see how they come together.

We've been introduced to another group that is far away and not in the same fight, so... I don't know. Trusting that we will get there.

It took a couple of chapters to get rolling, but I'm in now.

The best indicator of a good book is my willingness to sacrifice time to it. I've been sacrificing time to this.

I've just completed Jesse James Fain's story and I'm still quite enjoying this collection.

I am really enjoying how Dobson is resolving this story. Verry good storytelling.

This is evolving nicely. I am enjoying it quite thoroughly.

I am invested. Giving this story more time than planned. That's good. I have only one small issue about the lack of cameras in a future military environment (they are absolutely there, but not pervasive as I would expect).

I am enjoying this story and the way it is being told. One caveat, I hate fake cursing. Unless the in world curses mean something to the story, just curse. Storytelling should easily communicate and fake curse words break the flow, totally pull me out of the story (read the word, stop, translate the word, thinking it in conventional curse, continue). It's only irritating, but if the story weren't well told... yuck.