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Although there have been twists and turns, still think I have this figured out.

So, we have tangents like med school fun with cadavers that have nothing to do with the story.
We have a plot advancements that don't advance the plot, just move us to the next person who knows nothing about what the protagonist seeks to find other than the next person who knows nothing about...

Holding interest.
Suspect how this'll turn out, but we'll see.

Still enjoying it, it's still holding interest as we come into the climax.

Holding interest.

Expository in the extreme = wa-a-ay overwritten.

Satire = typical Vonnegut.

Overly descriptive.

Interesting history of Halloween coupled with the ways different cultures have celebrated it {if that's the right word} through time.

A little repetitive

Dean adds a little bloat and exposition on his way to the climax.

A little bloat, some overly descriptive narrative, but it's holding interest.

Slightly expository, but holding interest. Surprising is Dean's method of making a talking dog- believable.

Skim, baby, skim!
First miss on a prediction though.

Although the plotline continues to hold interest, predictability not only continues, it is expected.
Particularly the now introduced romance trope.
The 2nd 25% of the book is more skimmable than the 1st 25%.
Accordingly, most of what is being skimmed is bloat, which has become more dominant.
Strongly suspect the reason for this is because the author was aware, from his original sketches, this was to be serialized.

Acceptable plotline, predictable however.
Overly descriptive, making it very much skimmable.

Good prose & all, but is slightly confusing at times.

Well written, but there is some bloat.

Well written.

Still a compelling read, but rife with unnecessary bloat = still skimmable.

The core story is still good, but there's been a lot of redundancy = skimmable.

Good. Holding interest.

A good read.

Good suspense during the tomb digging constructs.

Keeps getting better; enjoying this.