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At 58%, she says she's a decent shot and can use a gun to defend herself. Now she's saying she refuses to carry one because she doesn't trust herself not to do more harm than good. Thankfully the inconsistencies didn't end up as plentiful as it seemed they would be, but it's still annoying.

She recognized the pain meds and then doesn't know what they are a few pages later. This is already starting to bother me.

There are already plot inconsistencies. The FMC says she told her best friend about a meeting at Righteous at 8% and that Nat was already pestering her for details, but she's just gotten home from the meeting, and Nat is completely surprised by the news.

Okay, she's saying she's interested in something happening with Drustan. I'm calling my next shot - she's going to have a fling with Drustan but end up with Kallen.

Okay, I'm calling my shot; I've been convinced for a while that I can tell the twist that is going to happen. <spoiler> Because Kenna helps Lara complete each of the trials, the shards are going to decide she gets magic and she will take over the Blood House. </spoiler>

Something is "cursively written in ink". The feeling of foreboding is growing.

This book just said, "her bright blue eyes, almost onyx in color, are more pronounced...". Onyx is black. How are bright blue eyes almost black? I'm like two pages in, and I'm already worried.