Keith Baker > Recent Status Updates

It is very hilarious hearing him talk about “the tools and filters on social media sites” - which they then have removed.

This stats extremely repetitive, but has interesting anecdotes.

I feel the core message is solid—use social media thoughtfully. But I think that’s like saying “quitting C is easy if you never started it.” It’s a message fighting a billion dollar marketing behemoth.

Be mindful.

I mean, the writing started rough, but I feel like it’s finding it’s stride and doing more atmosphere over adverbs to explain.

Finding it’s stride.

We are back, he said, disturbingly.

The dialogue is slowly losing all the adverbs and allowing the scene to convey.

It’s improving, he said, allegedly.

It’s getting better, he said, hopefully.

…not the best work but it’s getting better.

Oh, *this* is his first book? You can tell.