Amielle Dar > Recent Status Updates

What a breath of fresh air! I’m halfway through and pleased by the storytelling. Soto knows how to build anticipation.

I’ve figured out what I don’t like about the character or maybe it’s the writing style. The narrator says what they’re doing and why they’re doing it. It feels like bragging. “I put butter on her pancakes because my parents never used margarine so it kinda stuck”. I mean… what when is that? Haughty! Cunty! It must be the style of writing because both characters do it when it’s them talking. Sigh.