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Something’s rotten in the burrow of fat rabbits

This is action packed but a bit robotic in delivery and transition. The other issue is that time is central as concept right now but it’s not properly paced to reflect that. They’re barely in a boat that’s supposed to cover a long distance and poof light appears and they have to get out. There’s no emotional rest or pause. Idk.

Good twists but could use a little more polish / subtlety.

I am loving this opening please don’t let me down. I love the characters and the opening pages describing things by what’s - not - there hooked me.

Girl how long are we gonna throw general, oversimplified hero and villain stories without backup data

Not sure I’m down with this opening of leaders are such geniuses for asking their minions to generate more revenue without extra headcount

It’s raining F bombs and sauciness now hello

Finally, Grace…

Well that’s quite the start

Let’s see what’s up Rey 👀

Fast paced start. Yowza.

I want these people in my life

Funny, engaging, realistic characters and dialogue.

Strong start!!!

Well the f bomb camp significantly increased lol

Please can we just say it’s Carlos so we don’t have to deal with him anymore

Let’s see what the hype is all about

Welcome to trauma in therapy

Continues with alternating past and present timelines. The confrontation scene rang and felt true, that was well executed.

Strong start, premise and characters both intriguing

Ok so the audiobook is the author, from New Zealand, and omg the first chapter is completely bonkers

Reading references from The Correspondent. Well that’s not a disturbing start at all.