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I understand they are supposed to be extremely rich but do they have to talk about it like they are bragging? Doesn’t really sell the mindset of someone rich but instead just an author trying to convince us they are rich by telling us they are.

Progress but still many mysteries
Mostly focusing on world building
Realistic Progress (Slow but keeping it interesting)

Interesting world building
The separated povs and worlds makes the switch ups very interesting (doesn’t get boring in either)
Curious how their first meeting will go

Already too much mentions of her height….

I Like how the characters are over 20
Like there are many authors who would have kept this concept in high school while one can see that they work better in Universities
Still the whole Mafia members and deaths seem a bit exeggerated but still better than in high school
I am just saying this because there are quite a few adult themed books being strangly placed in high schools with minors for some reason…..

Feel a bit Like Reading a wattpad story
the author trying to create a mysterious air kind of was overdone nd instead quite cringe

Don’t really like the start
Directly explaining the backstory instead of slowly seeing it is kind of a bad writing choice if the author wants us to immerse in this fantasy world

Ml only personality is his Trauma and possesivness of fl
Don‘t really get to know anything about him that isnt related to his Trauma
He is cold just for the Plot

Hunter stare? Really???

Why does it sometimes feel like she is describing animal behavior while talking about their expressions and feelings. Like always just saying the same thing in his expressions isn’t’t accurately showing his feelings for her. I get it is supposed to be kind of hidden but I would like better descriptions for there encounters because sometimes i am just imaging him as a brooding animal

The “baby girl” makes me cringe so hard

Word choices are sometimes a bit questionable. Who says masculine domination….

Why are the women in this book so male focused? Seems to me like antagonising the other women to let the female lead look better but idk

I just hope this talk is exaggerated for the fake part of the story and gets better in the progression of their story

Idk his dialogues are kind of weird. Like this possessive talk?? A bit ew

Wtf is a masculine Office 😭

For now typical romcom but do they need to talk about Alpha Males…. A Little Bit toooooo cringe for me

Bernard hesitating to help out of fear

Seeing lenina and Johns differences in Normality

*belongs

Showbusiness how the people get dehumanized
Laughing about mithers, Fathers and a Tragik love story because they can’t comprehent it by what they have been though (everyone bringst to everyone)

Again reminder how they are even profitting from the dead

Bernard jealous of their friendship
Taking More soma

Helmholtz as forgiving and generous

It???

Only places worth exploitation are getting “civilised”