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Feel a bit Like Reading a wattpad story
the author trying to create a mysterious air kind of was overdone nd instead quite cringe

Don’t really like the start
Directly explaining the backstory instead of slowly seeing it is kind of a bad writing choice if the author wants us to immerse in this fantasy world

Ml only personality is his Trauma and possesivness of fl
Don‘t really get to know anything about him that isnt related to his Trauma
He is cold just for the Plot

Hunter stare? Really???

Why does it sometimes feel like she is describing animal behavior while talking about their expressions and feelings. Like always just saying the same thing in his expressions isn’t’t accurately showing his feelings for her. I get it is supposed to be kind of hidden but I would like better descriptions for there encounters because sometimes i am just imaging him as a brooding animal

The “baby girl” makes me cringe so hard

Word choices are sometimes a bit questionable. Who says masculine domination….

Why are the women in this book so male focused? Seems to me like antagonising the other women to let the female lead look better but idk

I just hope this talk is exaggerated for the fake part of the story and gets better in the progression of their story

Idk his dialogues are kind of weird. Like this possessive talk?? A bit ew

Wtf is a masculine Office 😭

For now typical romcom but do they need to talk about Alpha Males…. A Little Bit toooooo cringe for me

Bernard hesitating to help out of fear

Seeing lenina and Johns differences in Normality

*belongs

Showbusiness how the people get dehumanized
Laughing about mithers, Fathers and a Tragik love story because they can’t comprehent it by what they have been though (everyone bringst to everyone)

Again reminder how they are even profitting from the dead

Bernard jealous of their friendship
Taking More soma

Helmholtz as forgiving and generous

It???

Only places worth exploitation are getting “civilised”

John being seen as a spectacle / a animal

No cloning in higher classses
Mass production of humans only for lower working classes

Again lower class being poc (black)

John only being referred to as the “savage”

Still critique from Bernard

Seeing how people only have problems against the system if THEY don’t profit

Bernards changes after Becoming someone „important“
Talking about women like objects (“have whichever of them he likes”)

Soma shortening life span ?

Perspective changes are still sometimes confusing