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Did the math. For half of the book there is 9 jokes about piss and shit and 26 jokes about sex. (some of these examples go on for paragraphs or even pages long) On average there's a gross sex or toilet joke every 6.8 or 7 pages.

DONE WITH PART 1!!

I hate these characters. An interesting scene could be going on, aka HAP coming alive, and it's interrupted by Nurse Rachet and Rambo and their bullshit quips. Can they shut up for one second? Hey maybe give the potentially dangerous android, whom was just brought back to life, some space? Maybe hes not angry and is just confused? I hate these obnoxious assholes, Victor should crash out at them.

Rereading it and wow, Nurse Rachet is weird. Like with all of her sexual comments reminds me of Henry fondle from BoJack. When she's called out i can't believe they move on by saying that "it's how she is" and "victor is sensitive" bro im starting to say this shit is harassment. I feel like im being SA'd by Klune's bad writing.