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Lots of hype for this author. Not impressed so far.

- the filler swear words. You don't need to add fuck to every page to show you're edgy.
- too many run on sentences. Simultaneously, too many abrupt half sentences that are supposed to be dramatic? But 4 in a row sorta fall flat...
- very much over the excessive partying, drugs & alcohol in part 1.
-male/female/alphamale. Ugh.

Not sure I'll finish. We'll see.

Lots of hype for this author. I am not impressed so far.

- the filler swear words. You don't need to add fuck to every page to show your edgy.
- clumsy writing, too many run on sentences. And too many abrupt half sentences that usually are meant to be dramatic (but they fall flat)
- very much over the excessive partying, drugs & alcohol in part one
-male/female/alpahole. Ugh

Not sure I'll finish, we'll see.