i don’t think this book had an editor. there are so many moments where a scene contradicts itself. for example: chapter 31, nate was shirtless when he arrived in the kitchen and then the next 2 page state he’s in a shirt? there was no transition to him slipping a shirt on.
very weird and really disrupts the flow of the story which is a bummer considering how well the yearning and inner dialogues are
— Aug 26, 2025 02:50AM
Add a comment