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all telling and no showing, we know nothing about anyone except he swims and she’s smart because that’s all we’re ever told. Elementary school me would write her own little stories and pretty sure they were probably just like this (terrible)

I WANT A LOCK ON THAT BEDROOM DOOR TO KEEP THEM AWAY FROM EACH OTHER. I skim the paragraphs of when they’re in the bedroom cause I’m so scared of what could happen.

I’m laughing at how bad this is but I will finish this just so no one dismisses my review cause of dnf. On track for .000001 star. To quote miss Tyra Banks “it is so bad I want to give you a zero but that’s not possible so I give you a 1”