So far liking the overall idea and execution of this book. However, whomever was tasked with editing this book really failed the author. I’ve already been pulled out of the story by awkward paragraph breaks and typos (including pluralizing a last name with ‘s). Most recently, a horse was described as making a “whiney” rather than a “whinny.”
— Sep 13, 2026 05:23PM
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