Dislike the writing style, but I like the characters. The narration feels a bit like fanfiction where you get things described too much. The readers are smart, they will figure out why the main character looks at the shoes of people in great detail but not at their face without the narrator explaining it. Yet, the narrator explains it… Great potential, lackluster delivery. Still continuing it.
— Aug 23, 2022 02:19PM
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