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I'm not sure but this may be a DNF. The books in this series are nice separately. However, as a collection, it's redundancy is off putting. What's keeping me going thus far in this book is the relationship between James and Tristan...half brothers. We'll see. Maybe, I'll put it down for a while and come back.

This storyline rankles my very being. My Native American ancestors are probably rolling their eyes. The story addresses the history of white men wrongly taking the land of the Native Americans as well as another white man offering hope only to molest children. Yet, it's a... yep, you got it, white guy who sweeps in and saves the day with his ideas & his mother. Too cliched to finish? Trying hard to finish.

I'm a 1/4 into this story and I'm considering adding this to my DNF list. The author's understanding of addiction & recovery presents to be miniscule. There are some sterotype issues. *sigh* I've read the books in this series back-to-back. I probably should've taken a break but I like the characters of this series.

I'm only just beginning but the poor editing is nerve-wracking.

Nana steals the show... the book...the whatever EVERY TIME. I'm laughing so hard that tears rolling!
“...Also, I may have slipped your honey the tongue, Johnnie, but don’t worry, I wasn’t trying to steal your man. That was just one of them, you know, advanced rescue techniques. I saw it on a rerun of Baywatch.”

I'm strong "in like" with Shane, Noel, Jason & Tristan. There are a few editing issues but nothing that is taking away from my reading enjoyment.

I'm strong "in like" with Shane, Noel, Jason & Tristan. There are a few editing issues but nothing that is taking away from my reading enjoyment.

I'm not sure I'll make it to the end.

I don't mind predictable story lines. A good storyteller is a good storyteller, regardless of predictability. However, poor editing often forces me to not finish a book. Be careful of grammar and homophones.

I don't mind predictable story lines. A good storyteller is a good storyteller, regardless of predictability. However, poor editing often forces me to not finish a book. Be careful of grammar and homophones.

I don't mind predictable story lines. A good storyteller is a good storyteller regardless of predictability. However, poor editing often forces me to not finish a book. Be careful of grammar and homophones.

I'm going to pass on this free book. Maybe I will pick it up another time. The two or three sentences were ridiculously wordy.

WTH? I'm not sure I'll be able to finish it.

Reserving comment.

I've just realized I've skipped books 2 - 4. UGH!!!!

I'm trying to enjoy this last installment but the editing, rather lack of, is frustrating. Seriously, there are unfinished sentences. WTH!!

Editing is awful. In fact, it's nonexistent. I don't think I'll be finishing this book.

Editing is awful. In fact, it's nonexistent. I don't think I'll be finishing this book.

2.5 Stars.

Baby, Sunshine, Honey, Babe, Bear, slut, lover, boy... Seriously, enough already with pet the names. Wait a minute, parents watching their "straight" kissing another man & have no questions? Seriously. Otherwise, I'm enjoying the story.

Baby, Sunshine, Honey, Babe, Bear, slut, l over, boy... Seriously, enough already with pet name. Wait a minute, parents watching their "straight" kissing another man & have no questions? Seriously. Otherwise, I'm enjoying the story.

Baby, Sunshine, Honey, Babe, Bear, slut, l over, boy... Seriously, enough already with pet name. Wait a minute, parents watching their "straight" kissing another man & have no questions? Seriously. Otherwise, I'm enjoying the story.

Reserving comment. I'm just not sure how I feel about this book.

*shrug*

Fiction? Yes. Believable fiction? Nope. MCs too beautiful, too creative, too insightful, too… too.. too much. Jory (Matter of Time series) and Stefan are the same freaking annoyingly perfect, everyone-loves-them character. *rolling my eyes* I'm trying to finish.

Grown men, gay or otherwise, do not call another "bunny". That's just way too much. Otherwise, nice story.

Oh my word! I made the biggest mistake of not listening to an audio sample before buying the audiobook. I just wanted a good book to workout & run errands. *sigh* I can't understand. It sounds fake.