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I've read fanfics with more depth, nuance, drive and spice.

Only one chapter in, the writing is ugly. How many times he repeats some expressions in mere 3 pages:

and all, and all, and all, and all, and all, and all, and all, and all (i'm serious);

goddam, goddam, goddam, goddam, damn, damn;

or anything,or anything, or anything, or anything, or anything;

as hell, the hell, the hell, as hell;

sort of, sort of, sort of, sort of, sort of;

anyway, anyway, anyway, anyway;