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Liked the setting and the idea behind it. Not sure on the spiritual aspect that is in the fore though. Will see how that goes.

Story has gotten me more invested.

I liked the night garden scene so far, and Aurora’s illusion of solitude.

Liked the prose so far. Didn’t feel grounded enough with the events. Also Aurora being a yes girl all her life goes, “I don’t belong to anyone!” When she is taken away by Hadria.

Also why did she assume she was just saved with no strings attached when Hadria made it clear when she crashed the wedding, she was just claiming what belonged to her?

Also the dialogue is a bit airy.

Will see how this goes.