Interesting premise and some clever dialogue. So far though the author is discribing a lot of the characteristics of the characters, especially Gage, than showing them (i.e. "I am noble" "I am clever"). Gage starts out lusting after another woman thinking his wife is dead who promptly reappears shortly in. It's a bit hard to follow, but an interesting story. I'm curious where it goes from here
— May 06, 2013 06:20PM
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