Nikki Moon > Recent Status Updates

“Party?” It seemed I could only manage single-syllable words. 

That’s two syllables babygirl 🙏🏻

“Lord Wright Highsmith is already on his way.”

He hadn’t told me Wright Highsmith was on his way.

Huh??? He literally did though

This guy’s name is Niko and you called him Nike 😭😭😭

I’m going to start SOBBING because FIRST you misspelled Errilith’s name and now you’re suddenly calling him Errilor??? He’s an Errilor Death Raven, that’s not his NAME and I know you mean ERRILITH and not a DIFFERENT raven 😭😭😭

“‘We care,’ I rue to Yvan” that is not how that word is supposed to be used what are you doinggggg 😭 why is this so bad

It’s spelled both ways in the same sentence??? Laurie wtf 😭😭😭😭

How do you spell Errilith’s name wrong 4 times (Errlith) and I just noticed on the third instance 💔 it took 3 years for this to come out and there’s so many mistakes 😭😭😭

I actually hate this book. What do you mean they’re on a dragon but suddenly it’s a different creature? Did you forget that quickly or change it and miss that correction oh my god

I wish I was reading this physically so I could THROW THIS STUPID BOOK ACROSS THE ROOM

It’s actually making me so mad how much this book (series) contradicts itself. It’s so stupid. Like do you even know what you just wrote a few pages ago??? Nothing about the timeline of events and people’s ages makes any sense either

Marissa I beg actually get a better editor: who had grown up surrounded by tales of haunted castle and the wild hunt.

Huh do you mean “just BEEN shot” not “just SEEN shot” ridiculous

“He chuckled. Hesitated. But then—yes, continued.” That’s so bad wtf

There’s no way that was 5 minutes even, let alone 6

“A rumor of sunlight” Marissa plz you can’t just use the word rumor like that 😭

I still have no memory of who Kaz is 💔 I have forgotten many things

“wishing he would stop dragging out this conversation” me wishing Marissa would stop dragging out this entire book (pain)

Don’t talk to me about fat spiders rn ok I can’t handle it

But why is Verloren spelled wrong (Veloren) in this paragraph but correct in the very next one 💔

Never mind the ghost lighting an already burning candle

Are you stupid Anamaya literally said she didn’t have a change of clothes but suddenly she has one of the most expensive outfits she owns

It’s instead of its again 💔💔💔 this is actually so bad I’m in physical pain

That isn’t what collate means, did you even use a dictionary

Great-great-grandaunt sorry what 💔 I don’t think the “grand” is necessary

Using it’s when it should be its… oh my expectations for this just dropped even lower 😭

Why does she spell it both grey and gray 💔 girl just pick one tf

“The floor tipped beneath Loren knees” this is honestly just as poorly edited as Nytefall omg

What am I even reading 😭😭😭