DNF- the beginning was good, story was moving along decent but once the jump happened it was so weird and all over the place the girl was so wishy washy it irritated me that she couldn't make up her mind. There was some typos but that didn't bother me as much. Also it was confusing how all of a sudden marcus thebody guard dude had a name and he wanted to take over.
— Jan 02, 2023 06:55PM
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