I’m enjoying the main character’s POV. But the POV of her “evil sister” almost seems too over-the-top vulgar and brash. It’s trying too hard to make her voice stand out from that of her “good” sister’s, but it makes her seem cartoony and the language seems unnecessarily excessive. Hopefully, she becomes less of a one-dimensional character as the book goes on.
— Nov 29, 2020 11:02PM
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