So far there's been lazy writing ("I find myself admiring her robe, like the merchant's daughter that I am." *cue long description of robe*), a main character that "blush(es) against my will" over a guy with "midnight-black eyes" she just met after being incarcerated for two weeks and set alight and oh, this hunk is the crown prince. Obviously. I hope I'm wrong, but anyone willing to take a bet on the ending?
— Oct 19, 2015 12:55PM
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