Ok I’m still reading this and it’s fun but what is with the inconsistency? Did nobody proofread this? In the first bit a character is described as having pointedly non-highlighted mousey hair and a few second later she is lustrous. Also now I’m at a bit where the character Noah is spoken of as the and cousin of another character (he is her cousin)? Still a fun book. Still will finish and likely enjoy but huh?
— Jul 17, 2024 04:59PM
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