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Was this not edited properly, there is to many times when the sentences run on or characters are in two completely different location from one page to the next. Quicksilver was so good however this book really falls flat . Authors stop making a series that could have been a duology into a trilogy. The lack of editing is taking me out of the story.

Why did this book only start to get good halfway through. Have a feeling this book series should have been a douology.

''I placed my hand palm up between us." Why put hand in the sentence we all know what a palm is.

Can Hayden move to whatever team Shane goes to.

As someone who rarely gets icks with books this has many icks.