This is a decent story line & a quick read… but wow, some of the writing just appalls me. Big fan of TJR’s other novels but this writing is not her strongest.
“I made the sweet potatoes and the green beans,” she says proudly. Something about her childlike pride reminds me of the can of snow. “Oh!” I say, “Look, Mom! Rachel and I brought spray snow.” I pull out the cans. “Awesome, right?”
— Feb 11, 2025 09:27PM
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