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Loooove how much 2010s era fanfiction is being used as a serious control group corpus here. because it really is that serious!

Hm! that’s a choice with Leto! isn’t he supposed to be 9? i did not want to read the word “beefswelling” in my dune book!

jessica and farad’n’s chapters are now the only readable ones in this book. I’m gonna have to finish this anyways

took nearly 200 pages for a plot to actually start happening after half of this being all the characters plotting in convoluted ways about what they Thought Might Happen. and in incredibly confusing ways that only get clarified sometimes. i think mr herbert needs a lesson in Inciting Incident

already having thoughts about the protagonist’s obnoxious unnecessary racism but we’re going to push through just so i can type out a measured response