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Definitely reads like someone telling you a story.

Definitely reads like someone telling you a story.

Not fond of the trope of the main character being a "clever, curious, independent young woman" in a time when it's improper for young women to be "clever, curious, and independent".
Not enough to stop reading, but been done, and been done better.

Not overly fond of the tired trope "A woman being curious, clever, outspoken, and independent" in a time when it's not proper for a young woman to be "curious, clever, outspoken, and independent."
Not a deal breaker but been done and been done better.

Not seeing a point to the castle build since she leaves the castle not 2 paragraphs later. Hopefully we'll come back to it.

It's interesting to see Hans side if the story. As it means we know what his true motives are but not the other characters in the story.