Okay don’t get me wrong, I am enjoying this so far but the writing, specifically the characterisation, is leaving something to be desired. We have 6 different POVs but honestly, each chapter could be from any of the 6 main characters. There’s hardly any inner monologue for each person and I feel like we’re learning very little about what drives them personally. Keen to see where it ends up though.
— Aug 11, 2025 04:08AM
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