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ali and his bestfriend get caught somewhere theyre not suppose to and have to find theyre way out

setting: New York ghetto, apartment building
scene: in the apartment hallway when they first met
why: very funny setting getting to know Ali's thoughts.

main character:Allen "Ali" brooks

the big picture is Jaxon getting sent to rehab and he has a date in a few days for the first time

the main idea is the guy going on a ate with a girl but he's very self conscious.

I picture them going all the way to the state finals and shane getting his scholarship (dueker pg,249)

In the next part i think that shane will feel guilty with his first couple of pitches and then he will lock in and win the game and get his scholarship.

"... creating a run out of thin air"(deuker pg 216)

" for any instant I thought about telling him the truth. But how could I tell him something I couldn't completely explain myself" (Deuker 190)

" I thought before I didnt want to die not ever no matter how old or how sick. but that night death seemed peaceful not scary"

" But with my dad it was different. He wasn't getting hazy in my memory. The way he lived and the way he died were clear. Maybe it wasn't that I couldn't remember him. Maybe I didn't want to." pg 138 deuker carl

the antagonist is his dad he killed his self and it affected Shane's life a lot

the main character is a highschool boy named shane

I like my book because of how real life and dramatic it is. With the father getting arrested first thing in the book to them selling they're mansion and living in a duplex something is always happening in this book and I love it.

page turner

genre: drama/fiction