Kayli Hendricks > Recent Status Updates

Seriously. You’re gonna give me all these philosophical monologues about grief that don’t fit the tone of the story, repeatedly tell me about how Laurel was the only person who knew Lila but with Theo somehow he just knows her BUT YOU BARELY GIVE ME DETAILS ABOUT THEIR ACTUAL INVESTIGATION?!?! Tell me how they came to the plan, SHOW me them sneaking to the tunnels don’t just tell me, such cop out writing

Some repetitiveness is starting to grate at my senses, also wdym thunder and then lightning followed? Thats not how science works

How many times are we going to be told that the results of the investigation “didn’t sit right” with the main characters? Its like every chapter we get a reminder - Also, wish we had some more build up and background before jumping right in to the mystery, maybe a flashback on their past would’ve helped flesh it out more