Suspending my belief immensely as it’s difficult to determine what the setting is supposed to be. A mix of modern references alongside fantasy elements doesn’t quite seem to gel. So far I’ve found the story quite YA, save for the swearing which felt out of place, especially when profanity is used but then the phrase “a crock of horse dung” was sprinkled in - it’s giving inconsistent vibes.
— Apr 27, 2025 03:22AM
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