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Pros:
• Interesting to see an in-progress novel - offers some insight into the process.
• Viscerally descriptive despite the relative simplicity of the scenes and the narrative.

Cons:
• Very undercooked narrative (understandably so).
• Difficult to discern the time scale and when events are occurring relative to each other.
• Significance of many characters/events is not particularly clear.

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