So far not very enjoyable. The chapters will start off making it sound like all this time has passed, or start talking about the day as if it’s at the end of it, but then start back at the beginning. And it’s only one day later. The FMC also will get lost in her own thoughts way too frequently and actual time passes so then the people she’s talking to wonder what’s wrong with her
— Apr 13, 2025 01:04PM
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