While the concept is interesting, and the basic story telling is good, this edition reads like a high school sophomore wrote it. It is full of grammatical and spelling errors, such that I as a former language teacher could not go on.
Examples: Ch 10 "Gideon spared with him" Context: sparred
Ch 17: "Being place back in chains" - being placed
Either there was no proofreader, or he/she needs a different job.
— May 19, 2023 10:43AM
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