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I am flying through this

I'm really enjoying the build up and the slow burn but the FMC isn't exactly coming across as a divorced 33-year-old woman. The way Zapata wrote her makes her seem so much younger, since she is shrieking and exclaiming her way around town. If you'd tell me she was a naive 20 y/o, I would also believe you

All I want is to get lost in a really good fantasy series and I'm pretty sure this isn't going to be that, since the world building is already being half-assed, but we'll give it a shot

there is a little bit of cringe happening