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Certainly an interesting opening

There is a lot of exposition. Much of it could be reworked to come across less clunky to the reader. We also do some major time skipping, from December to May in a few chapters. But, the chapter lengths are good and make it easy to read a lot without realizing.

We seriously can NOT be trying to throw in a third crush/love interest 😩 not this late in the game

A lot has happened. And it’s still very stereotypically gay.

We are moving SO fast, there are several things that just happened in this one chapter that we should’ve spent more time on