The story is interesting but the sentences are truly annoying me. The grammar in particular. The author starts sentences from continuous thoughts. I don’t like it 🤷🏽♀️
Could be just me but for example on pg. 78: “She got up, went to the guest room, showered, and changed. Focused on the process and cleared her mind.” To me, the second sentence made me pause cuz it doesn’t work.
— Aug 07, 2026 03:08AM
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