you know it’s bad when you’re on page 15 and have already been forced to suspend belief 4 different times. these 4 times all took place within the span of 2 pages btw.
unnamed man: *wakes up with absolutely 0 memories*
2 seconds later
*proceeds to list 4 different memories of before he woke up*
not to mention the VERY heavy handed foreshadowing so far. i hate dnfing but i fear we may be heading that way
— May 09, 2026 05:36PM
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