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I like having multiple narrators, but I absolutely hate when the male/female narrator jumps in to speak their lines in someone else’s POV. I feel like, if you’re a narrator, you should be skilled enough to deepen or pitch your voice to fit a new character when it’s your turn to read. Having Narrator B jump in mid-Narrator A’s POV is so jarring. It’s DNF-worthy for me. It’s that serious, I fear.

They’re trying to villainize Hannah, but that’s my client. So what if she tried to kill that demon? I would’ve done it 20 chapters earlier. Free her, your honor.

Lmaooooo yeah let’s wrap it up. Christopher needs to die. And he can take that demon with him.

Hannah’s much better than me. I would’ve been in handcuffs by now. Happily. Between her useless fucking husband and that demon, Hannah is not only a saint, but also a dumbass.

I already know I don’t want kids but lmaoooo I woulda BEEN called CPS back and said I wanna return her

Christopher needs to get stoned. I volunteer to throw the first rock. 🧱

Chris thinking he’s Captain America, The Baby Whisperer, The Nice Guy 🫩 And I hate that Hannah has compromised on 2 accounts now: she wanted to adopt a baby and she sure as hell didn’t want to adopt THAT baby. But she said yes to please a man. Let’s see how that works out for you, babe.

Okay, I understand why teenage Macy felt betrayed. But I don’t understand why 29-years-old Macy felt betrayed and essentially called him a liar and made him APOLOGIZE when he literally just told her he was raped. Are we fr?

Y’all out here fucking in the woods. Whole time, I’m waiting for y’all to have a fucking conversation that you’ve been prolonging for the entire fucking book.

So, did he cheat on her or what? Although, from how Elliot’s written, I cannot fathom that that would be the case.

Sean has his own problems, but he’s extremely rational and level-headed about all of this. Present-day Macey is annoying as hell, though. I’m just ready to find out why she ghosted him for 11 years. This back and forth is dragging, lowkey.

Something has definitely happened to Eva Mae. And I feel so bad for her and Perfect. Hell, all of the Peace children are going to need therapy. In Emma’s quest to heal her inner child with Perfect, she’s neglecting tf out of her other children.

Nooooooo

This book is…not what I thought it was at all.

You know how touched in the head you gotta be to be horny when you’re quite literally stranded on a desert island and just lost half your family? I’m thinking he was about to say, “Oh we gotta find a clean water source.” That’s my bad for thinking, I guess.

Y’all notice how the woman with dark hair is almost always the more “masculine” one in sapphic books?

Just checked the table of contents. They’re stranded for 43 chapters, Lord help me 😭

This babe has been stressing me out since chapter 1

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Yeah, let’s wrap it up. I’m not reading that. This is Still Beating all over again.

I do not like, nor do I understand, when romance authors make their MCs siblings date one another. That’s just so weird to me.