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EEEEEE CANT WAIT TO CONTINUE

This book strayed so far from the original plot you couldn’t even see it…

“I found myself lost in his orbs”
Why the word orbs?? Why not just use the simpler and more normal term : eyes

So he quit but is still on the team?

So apparently, the captain can kick people off the team? And Campbell decides to quit because of a conflict with his teammate???

Currently? No chemistry. No value. No logic. Only pick me girl vibes. Annoying male lead. The antagonist best friend that’s a bitch. That new friend that is being completely neglected. That one guy that used the female lead to get to her best friend. That same guy not having any sort of chemistry with the female lead. Like, no. Just no.

Still chapter 5 and…
This girl, hazel, tutored Campbell, the guy, once, not even that, and she saved his hockey career??? It’s still the start of their school year.
Also, bother Neveah and Hazel and Celeste scream: “Picke me! Chose me! Love me!”, it’s really not entertaining

Chapter 5 and it doesn’t make any sense, feels like chapter 50

“We’ve had undeniable chemistry since our moment in the bookstore” …yeah, no.