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LOVE how seemlessly Schwab weaves in the worldbuilding, even in only the first chapter!!

"I you'll be fine."

Listen.... This is the 2nd typo in two pages, and the 5th typo in 87 pages. IT DOESN'T SOUND LIKE A LOT, but every time I come across one, it immediately breaks immersion! Please hire an editor before publishing, I beg of y'all, fixing typos is the bare minimum. 😭

Okay okay, now we're getting somewhere!

Very lore-heavy first chapter, with no real connection to the protag yet!
But I'm looking forward to seeing things play out!!

Grateful for that list of 20s slang, goodness-

I'mma be honest. There are so many names, I can barely remember who any of them are, lawl.
And dear nuggets, did the petty little spat between the riders and the flyers drag OOOONNNN.
Curious to see what's going on with that silver-haired lady though.

THE WHIPLASH OVER WHOM TO ROOT FOR, GAWDDANG-

Mitch continues to be the MVP.

If only I didn't have to sLEEP-

HAHA!! OH DEAR!!!

Things are lookin' trickier and trickier by the week, oof-
BUT CONGRATS, SYDNEY, you're making some solid progress!!!! ; 7;/

Yeah sure, let's mock and name-call the kid who just became an orphan for being ""weird"", it's not like his parents just died or anything.

That does explain a lot. And you know what, good for him on that one. Good riddance.

MMMMM, listen. On the one hand, he kinda brought this on himself, and I'm still bitter about what he did before, so my sympathy for him is low here.
But at the same time, I don't wish this on anybody, YEESH-

Yeah alright, I'll support Women's Wrongs here.

Ugh!! UGH!!! He care her so much ghvctubd.
And babygirl....!! She tryin' so hard...! 8 ^8

Ooohhhh boy, it's going exactly where I was worried it was going (in a good way, thank you, Schwab for answering questions I was left with at the end of the first book.)

HOOOOOO, THINGS ARE ABOUT TO GO DOWN-

Mitch deserves the world, actually.

Dude is out here so desperate for ANY other explanation than what is so clearly right in front of him.

And so finally, we have caught up to the present.
GAWD, this is so good, I love this makeshift trio (plus pupper) very much!!

Meanwhile, I love Mitch. What a guy.

Okay, HECK Eli, actually, and heck Serena still, too.

OOF!! /OOF!!!!/ ROUGH, MAN!!!!!!
And I am eating this U P-

Heckin' RIP, my dude-

That's rough, buddy.

I am SO compelled by this book so far, and I can't tell if it's because everything Victor thinks and does is so eerily like what one of my own OCs would, or because the writing is just that strong.
I'm willing to say both probably contribute.

Yeah alright. Already hooked.

OOF.......
/OOF.....!!!!/
THAT WAS WRITTEN SO!!!
OH MAN, I'M TEARING UP, THAT WAS /ROUGH/-