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Its a Nero re write!

This needs an editor. I think it was written and self published with out being read through.

I choose to live in a world of only bears although preferably dog's.

This isn't dark romance.
This is pure horror!

Definitely nothing like twilight or any other vampire book I've read before and I'm only on page 45

Q.How many times do the same sentences repeat?
A. Multiple

Thats one way to get the word count up i guess. If I was the editor I would hand back every book that repeated more than once.
No stories need to have reminders several times per chapter. Its excessive annoying and gets stars knocked off.